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The House Wars begins...
« on: Mar 1st, 2005, 10:53pm »
 
K'Tar carried his Bat'leth with him as his siter passed a standard Klingon disruptor to him.  Baretha activated the transporter that transported them onto her ship and then she set the transporter to beam onto the IKS K'rak, a B'rel class ship belonging to the House of Breml.  "Ready brother?"
 
K'Tar nodded as he continued to stand on the transporter padd and his sister rejoined him, setting the transporter on a timer.  "It is a good day to die."
 
K'Tar and Baretha dissappeared in a swirl of red transporter beam.
 
<<IKS Krak>>
 
The two then reappeared on the forward section of the bridge.
 
"What is the meaning of this!" an elder Klingon said, standing from the COmmand chair.
 
"I am K'Tar, son of M'Rok, I've come to avenge the death of my brother, Breml!"  K'Tar roared and raised his disruptor, and fired it three times, each shot taking out a bridge crewman, as did his sister.  Soon the bridge was clear as Baretha quickly moved to lock the doors.
 
"Now, B'reml.  Prepare to die!"  K'Tar said as he rushed at the elder Klingon with his Bat'leth."
 
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« Reply #1 on: Mar 2nd, 2005, 10:28pm »
 
B'reml drew his Bat'leth that he had always kept at his side as he met with K'Tar's attack.  "How dare you come onto my ship and assualt my crew!"
 
K'Tar smiled as he pushed the elder Klingon off, using his Bat'leth.  He could smell B'reml's death.  "Your house killed my brother as well as  left my father's side during the Dominion War!  For that, you will die by my hand!"
 
K'Tar went into a rage and he swung ferociously at B'reml, who was doing his best to parry the blows when one cut deep into his arm.  K'Tar expertly spun the blade around and within a second, the blade sliced through B'reml's neck, decapitating him as his headless body soon fell to the deck in a pool of blood.  K'Tar's Bat'leth dripped in Klingon blood.  "Now what shall we do?"
 
"Send this ship and its crew to Gre'thor," K'Tar said with a smile.  K'Tar headed over to the Operations Console and accessed the engines, feeding the plasma flow back into the reactor chamber.  "K'Tar to MeH'Haj, two to transport!"
 
K'Tar and his sister, Baretha dematerialized off the bridge.  Two Seconds later, the B'rel Class vessel exploded in an impressive fireball.
 
K'Tar stepped off of the MeH'Haj transporter padd with his sister.  "Let me hang this in my quarters and I shall join you back on the station."
 
Baretha nodded.  "I look to drink to our victory," Baretha said with a smile.
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« Reply #2 on: Mar 4th, 2005, 1:21pm »
 
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Wouldn't this type of action draw a fair amount of attention from the base and security in specific?
 
I mean its not every day that a ship blows up around a starfleet base.
 
Plus there might be the slight problem of the fact that all klingon ships are docked to each other and this would tend to.. blow them up also?
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« Reply #3 on: Mar 4th, 2005, 5:24pm »
 
Forgot to mention that the K'rak was not docked.  As for attracting attention, of course it would, but K'Tar did not beam there directly from the station, so it would be very hard to track K'Tar and his sister.
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« Reply #4 on: Mar 8th, 2005, 10:50am »
 
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Actually, with the current situation with the alternate space threat the base is monitoring transporter activity.
 
So, if you did do this it wouldn't be that hard for them trace your path by eliminating all transporter activity from the base as its all logged.
 
Of course the fact that a single klingon ship would suddenly show a transporter signature after the fuss made by K'Hare about klingon's NOT using them might stand out like a flare in a barrel.
 
Just my 2 cents here but your "sister" would be nailed in seconds after only a short check of transporter activity.
 
Then a physical check would easily trace you back to your ship and then of course the blood on your Batleth might be a small clue as to your being involved.
 
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« Reply #5 on: Mar 8th, 2005, 11:01am »
 
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ros is correct.. if the above happened, I suspect there would quickly have been another transporter beam sending your char to the brig.
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« Reply #6 on: Mar 8th, 2005, 12:32pm »
 
However it was a house war between two rival familes in the empire.  The Federation would not get involved just as it didn't during the Klingon Civil War started by Gowron and the House of Duras.  The ship that exploded was not Federation property.  The most the Fed could really do is an investigation as no Federation property or personnell was damaged or destroyed.
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« Reply #7 on: Mar 8th, 2005, 3:38pm »
 
Vice Admiral Valren Arelwynn is the one with final call as the action takes place at his base.  If he counters this post, and he has, then it did not occur.
 
If it had occured the Federation have plenty to say.  You are physically in their jurisdiction.  You are a serving Bravo Fleet officer.  They got you on two points.
 
Using a disruptor to exact revenge is also bad form.  Were the bridge crew even guilty?  If not you would be acting dishonourably.  You can't take revenge in a dishonourable way or you could consign your brother to Grethor.  If they were guilty your brother would not be in peril but its still bad form.
 
Then there is the slaying of whatever other crew were not on the bridge...  Again, if they were not guilty you just did a no-no.
 
But then, not all worry about Honour too much.
 
All intended as constructive.  Though as I said on opening, if Vice Admiral Valren Arelwynn says it ain't so then it ain't.
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« Reply #8 on: Mar 8th, 2005, 4:57pm »
 
I am sick and tired of trying to develop MY character and it get shot down every time I do.  To hell with it.  Fine, the darn thing didn't happen as the tribble thing I did with K'Hare.  You people take this darn simming way too serious. Lighten up and have a sense of humor, geez.
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« Reply #9 on: Mar 9th, 2005, 9:12am »
 
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Hummm... I wasn't trying to stop you or anything like that... quite the contrary as it was an interesting bit of reading.
 
I just wanted to pick on you about possible side effects to your actions since it could possible impact others. Smiley
 
I rather enjoyed reading the by-lines about K'Tar.
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« Reply #10 on: Mar 9th, 2005, 2:37pm »
 
same thng here - i enjoyed the development that K'Tar brought and expect to see the XFY command a bit more flexible - perhaps there should be a compromise on what should and should not happen rather then erasing all of the event. Which btw were rather important to the player.
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« Reply #11 on: Mar 12th, 2005, 4:30pm »
 
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Quote from KTar   on Mar 8th, 2005, 4:57pm:
I am sick and tired of trying to develop MY character and it get shot down every time I do. To hell with it. Fine, the darn thing didn't happen as the tribble thing I did with K'Hare. You people take this darn simming way too serious. Lighten up and have a sense of humor, geez.

 
 
Develop your character the way you want but know that your actions affect us all.  You do X.  It is only fair that Valren responds to the event by doing what would be in character for him.  A ship blowing up outside his base would be a serious security issue.  Maybe the truth would be found out, maybe not, but you have to let him react.
 
Same with the tribble thing.  My response was intended to say are you really doing this, because if you were I'd react in character and I wanted to make sure you understood what that means.
 
Yes, some of us take simming more seriously than others.  That's a matter of style.  If you involve my character I will react as I think fit.  I spend several hours a day on BF in one form or another.  So yes, its serious for me.  
 
There is a place for different styles.  There are different simms with different foci.  And yes, I have an agenda.  I want to see Klingons played better in BF so I will comment when I see something that doesn't feel right to me.  But in the end, it is just my opinion.  I leave it to the audience to decide who is 'right'.  Feel free to have a Klingon simm that is a parody of trek or is written as a musical.  But don't expect me to let you use my character and make it canon for my simm.  Same with others here.  This is a huge joint mission so you have to consider other people's styles and not step on them.
 
As K'rahl said, killing the bridge crew with a disruptor questions your honor.  Perhaps the HoD would never face you but there would be other ways to react to that.  But once you killed him, you killed the other 5 (and there should have only been 5 more) crew members by blowing the ship.  Is there honor there?   Regardless of whether the ship was docked with another, blowing up one in an area where ships are densely packed is a threat to them.  Of course those ships would investigate.  Even if the issue of being in fed space was ignored, a Klingon ship blew up and no claim to the cause, no challenge, no explanation was given.  To anyone looking from the outside, the ship was attacked in a by stealth and subterfuge, a Klingon ship around a fed base was blown up.  You don't think the Empire would have questions for Valren?
 
There is nothing wrong with playing a Klingon who pretends honor while not being so, or a Klingon who's rage makes him make a mistake.  But you cannot just do a thing and expect everyone to ignore it.  Maybe we are too serious, but you aren't considering the effect you have on us by forcing us to accept it quietly.
 
roS made mention of the ship blowing up.  That's the hard thing to get past.  He also said something about the transporter.  Look at every post I had made on the subject.  Klingons will use transporters, its canon.  But my interpretation is they only do it when it invovles battle in some way... when the chance of dying through an accident is acceptable because your posture was aggressive and you were ready for death.  I could get past the attack on the bridge if it was established before or after, that the foe would not face you honorably.  But the next action, in my opinion, should have been to tell the rest of the ship what you just did and then waited to fight them, not to cover it up by blowing up the ship and hiding the act.
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« Reply #12 on: Mar 12th, 2005, 8:52pm »
 
Indeed.  My post was to point out what I felt was inconsistant, as well as reinforcing the right of Valren to intercede.
 
Rewriting the ending without the explosion would work.  Indeed technicaly you could claim the craft for your House.  The survivors of the ship might be from other Houses and decide to join you.  You might simply leave the ship, satisfied that honour had been acheived for your fallen brother.
 
You could even agree that if Valren permits this post as is that you surrender to his Security when charged.  It would then fall to the nearest Klingon Government official to get you out of his cells.  That would be Kur'rk by the way since Kur'rk is the Klingon Representative on the base.
 
That would probably leave your ship impounded here (XFY not this Forum), your crew confined to ship and some interesting posting.
 
There are a range of possibilities.  If the last one interests you speak with Valren and myself.  If the sugge sounds better then do that.
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